|Reviews for Temptress|
| l'orage d'absinthe 7/12/05 . chapter 1
| Black Tangled Heart 4/10/05 . chapter 1
I love the way it flows, the way the words cascade gracefully. The images are very powerful. Excellent.
| total-nirvana 1/26/05 . chapter 1
Why are you so awesome?
| Jennacharm 12/10/04 . chapter 1
"like the silk of cigarette smoke" is an amazing line.
| SilverSpinner 11/24/04 . chapter 1
...Somehow it is so hard to convey this emotion in a review...but I can't even begin to describe how hard this poem hit me... Incredible.
| Distant Mind 11/23/04 . chapter 1
I must say, you are very talented! But I also must thank you - your recent review of my poem (Natalie) lead me here, and I rediscovered my old poetry. I posted most of my work in Grade 8 - 9 (I'm now spending one more year in highschool before going to college for extra credit). THANK YOU! And if you would like to talk sometime, drop me a line at nervous_twitches hotmail dot com (sorry for the spelling, it's to prevent bots from picking it up :P)
| a duel of pens 111 11/22/04 . chapter 1
i really like this style of writing, the shape of the poem is so out of the ordinary, i really like it. but u seem to have a lot of this type of anger. hey. what better place to exercise it?
| AntiPleasure 11/22/04 . chapter 1
"I will become air..." that just drew me in completely at first because I love that kind of metaphor and your descriptions.
| Rebecca Kelsey 11/20/04 . chapter 1
you have such a way with words...
| Kusje 11/18/04 . chapter 1
thanks for your review. i read a few of your poems and i think that they are also powerful in words and meaningful. your a very beautiful poet with words. keep it up.
| Crimsonoaks 11/16/04 . chapter 1
i like this a lot. i especially like the ending. good job!
| simpleplan13 11/16/04 . chapter 1
did you mean for the but us not to be centered?
I liek this poeem very cool format and awesomely written... thanks for your review
| emotional-Teen 11/16/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This is so good! It has such meaning and emotion! This is awesome please continute writing. Thankies for reveiwing my poems!
| EvilNeko13 11/16/04 . chapter 1
Nice flow and good use of metaphors. An enjoyable read.
P.S. Thanks for the review!
| Aslan Israel 11/16/04 . chapter 1
Wonderful descriptions, they were so vivid. great job.