gorgeous.

I love the way it flows, the way the words cascade gracefully. The images are very powerful. Excellent.

Why are you so awesome?

"like the silk of cigarette smoke" is an amazing line.

- Jennacharm

...Somehow it is so hard to convey this emotion in a review...but I can't even begin to describe how hard this poem hit me... Incredible.

I must say, you are very talented! But I also must thank you - your recent review of my poem (Natalie) lead me here, and I rediscovered my old poetry. I posted most of my work in Grade 8 - 9 (I'm now spending one more year in highschool before going to college for extra credit). THANK YOU! And if you would like to talk sometime, drop me a line at nervous_twitches hotmail dot com (sorry for the spelling, it's to prevent bots from picking it up :P)

i really like this style of writing, the shape of the poem is so out of the ordinary, i really like it. but u seem to have a lot of this type of anger. hey. what better place to exercise it?

"I will become air..." that just drew me in completely at first because I love that kind of metaphor and your descriptions.

Jenna xoxo

you have such a way with words...

thanks for your review. i read a few of your poems and i think that they are also powerful in words and meaningful. your a very beautiful poet with words. keep it up.

i like this a lot. i especially like the ending. good job!

did you mean for the but us not to be centered?
I liek this poeem very cool format and awesomely written... thanks for your review

Wow! This is so good! It has such meaning and emotion! This is awesome please continute writing. Thankies for reveiwing my poems!

Nice flow and good use of metaphors. An enjoyable read.
EvilNeko13
P.S. Thanks for the review!

Wonderful descriptions, they were so vivid. great job.