Very interesting observation, but until you introduced the Sixth Sense example, you're presentation made me think this would be some sort of narrative.

Maybe it's just me, but this work seems to be little more than what your title suggests. I don't see a problem with your writing, but the piece lacks any satisfying substance. It seemed like this kind of thing would fit a discussion or a message board more.

You might find better luck if you formed an essay or a story based on this idea. Interesting concept, but again, it left me expecting more.

Brilliant. Great speculative insight. That's a really scary thought, actually xD

Huh. You really made me think. Your one of the few authors on here that I enjoy reading. You've just earned a special spot on my favorite author list. xD

This certainly adds a little bit of afterthought to a lot of past experiences. Very insightful.