if there's one thing for sure about this, it's that the emotion was impactful and well expressed. keep it up. -winter

I like the repetitions, especially at the end. Really helps make the poem. Anyway, thoroughly enjoyed this. :D

Wow...very good. I can relate. That's the only upside to failed romances...they inspire lots of poetry. Very good; will check out some of your other stuff. Review me if you're free.

This completely floored me. Nice job. :)

I've had many relationships like this. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.