I like it. It has a good rhythm to it, minus the last line (kinda disturbing, especailly when there's always this thing called hope and not-so-stupid-guys-that-have-not-yet-been-met). I can relate to the wanting to escape feeling. Good poem.

wow, I have so felt this way and have closed my eyes at the wheel. the only thing that kept me intact was my sister Great job and keep up the good work

This was really well done, and so original. I liked the rythm, and the general idea. It's very nice.

Powerful and passionate. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.