I like it. It has a good rhythm to it, minus the last line (kinda disturbing, especailly when there's always this thing called hope and not-so-stupid-guys-that-have-not-yet-been-met). I can relate to the wanting to escape feeling. Good poem.

wow, I have so felt this way and have closed my eyes at the wheel. the only thing that kept me intact was my sister ^^ Great job and keep up the good work

This was really well done, and so original. I liked the rythm, and the general idea. It's very nice.

Powerful and passionate. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.