Okay. Now that adds a lot of depth to the story. Interesting. I wouldn't want to meet your char. in a dark alleyway, considering. Just a question, but does she kill all demons? Or just bad ones...'Cause they're not all bad.
Oh, and I like the whole first last thing. That is really interesting. I like that view on things. And I didn't find any mistakes. ttyl!
Sayonara
~~Silv~~

Is this related to another story? or based loosely on btvs? LOL Too many questions I ask...shutting up now...nice...