Wow, nice turn there, took me completly by surprise. Good job, but I don't like the metaphors...

wow, um...what can i say? very well written, but sad ending. nice work! ^^

WRITE MORE, OR EVIL SQUIRREL-SAMA SHALL COME AND DESTROY YOU!

(Just kidding, but he will pund you will nuts. He's a little ticked that he can't remember where he put them.)

MU-HAH-HAH-HA!

I like it. It's dark...and kind of messed up...But good. I like it. I'm getting repetitive in my old age! *gasps* lol. It is very good, nicely dark, no spelling errors or grammatical errors that I noticed, and the idea is interesting...
Sayonara
~~Silv~~

ahh sad!! i liked alots...

Oh dear...Mei...O_O This is a really good fic...but...it's...so...um...heh...anti-climatic...that's really not the word for it...oh dear...I have misplaced my train of thought...so I am just going to ramble :P
Ya know...I am not going to ramble...it's too hard to think right now...too much work...had an elderly patient today that is in deep with dementia...sweetest thing on earth...just that she sang row row row the boat for eight hours straight...and then, she found out my name and kept calling me and calling me...and the nurses kept teasing me...Gah! grr...anyways...tata...off to review the rest of your stories...heh...