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Inmortal Luz De La Luna 2009-08-04 . chapter 1
T.T If only the world could be like that. I know of very few couples at my school who are like that. Good grammer, Good spelling, and a wonderful moral to the story.
winterwonderland 2008-08-17 . chapter 1
It's good to see things in a guy's POV. I love it when the stud falls for someone who isn't the gorgeous barbie-like types.. Wow.. Lacy being anorexic was a surprise. I kinda figured it out on the first date but never knew it ws that serious.. Great story that conveyed a good message.. It was wonderfully written.
no longer writing 2005-06-08 . chapter 1
hey jared.. i love this story. beautiful. i also love how you're really trying to get me to accept myself. things like this help. talk to you later, i hope your first day went well.
Lola Sanchez 2005-02-07 . chapter 1
wow. thats all i can say. this is terrific, and if i was a publisher, you know i'd have published this already, no doubt about it. wow. im gonna go and pay rent; then come and read mroe of your stuff...oh...i read ya profile, you come across as a very interesting guy...and id love to chat to you, so email me or add me to msn or yahoo...good luck.
Knightmare Elite 2004-12-27 . chapter 1
That was a cute little story. Very sweet especially in the way he actually fell in love with Lacy. Keep up the good work.
Nanners 2004-12-11 . chapter 1
*sigh* This was lovely. I liked it a lot. Good work. ^_^
Queen of Cups 2004-11-17 . chapter 1
Beautiful simply beautiful!
Kristina_Malfoy 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
Thank you for writing this. Some might call it cliche and say "oh yeah right, this could never happen in real life" but reading this made me actually believe that it does happen. Great job, keep up with the good ideas!
Ariel S. 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
That was written very beautifully. I like the descrtiption, and the name, Lacy. It all fits together very well.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
I thought it was sweet! The world needs more guys like Sam- all in all, it was a pretty good story with a moral message that was thoughtful. :) good work!
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