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| CielNombreUnDeesse 2005-09-29 ch 1,  | abusei luv thisbut i luv mana more= |
| Mlle. Daae 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, superb imagery. Please keep writing! ~Mlle. Daae |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty, you have a wicked good sense of writting. I liked the last 4 line. Pretty, Morbid, beautiful all in one! (And as to your response on the nec files chap 2?...I don't know the actor "Raven Simone" So..I guess not. ^_^) |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseImpressive poem - I like it, well done, I applaud you. |
| incandescent.smiles 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abusevery dark, and you were right that DirkBolero is crazy... anyway. this is good, but a tad too dark for my tastes. but *nods head* good job! ~leila* |
| konochi 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely wonderful. :) |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuse;-; That is low for someone to steal anothers hard work. THat is low and is unforgivable.;-; If you do delete your work from FP know that soo many people will miss you. (I certainly will.) ;-; Your work has inspired countless people. (Me included.) Hopefully it won't come to that. Once again I'm amazed at our poetry. The detail and just the word use really paints a picture. You can feel the speakers pain and share it all at once. I envy that and praise your ability to do that. ^-^ Well done. ~ Noelle ~ |
| Kalopsia 2004-12-08 ch 1, | abusegreat imagery used--this is a superb poem! |
| AntiPleasure 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseStill sticking to the same style as you always do but the writing has improved so much over the years. Well done Tok. It's been a while. Jenna xoxo |
| Jeremy 2004-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour poetic talent always amazes me...and usualy turns me on too;) *growls seductively* lol |
| Cthulhu 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseDarling, I wan't, I really actually like it. Just because I laughed doesn't mean I dont like it. I laughed because it was so good, I laugh at weird things, necrophilia actually amuses me. I seriously do like your work, I am sorry if you took offense, seriously. Oh, and btw, this song is also supremely good, keep writing. |
| Lord Jalore Mcbrige 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI feel Dolly. It feels so excrutiating to be in her shoes that I think she's numb to the pain! Okay but really I like this morbid project that you're investing in. REALLY dark deep dangerous! |
| Sublime Rhapsody 2004-11-21 ch 1, | abuseVery eerie and creative. I thought it was superb! Great job and please take a look at my work sometime! |
| twenty-second seduction 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is different. Such powerful imagery. I enjoyed reading it. It was cleverly written. darkened-flame |
| logical-unreason 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseDid fictionpress rape your account as well. God I ** hate the admin. Yes and if you are reading this fictionpress admin, choke on rusty nails. |