yay! see I tried to read this a while ago and couldn't get into it and enjoy it the first time, but this time around I loved it! and I don't know if it's just because I read this last, ridiculously fantasmically hot chapter, but what I just said seems deafeningly construed as sexual... gah

=D oh me gosh.
hhehehehee
-dies-
that was utterly fantabulas!
-comes back to life-

IM SO TOTALLY READING IT AGAIN haha =] wow.
youre writting has great...character to it =p
i loved it! ah im jealous. haha wishes i cud write like that =]
shweet. i cant REALLY tell if that was the last chappter but i think that i can deal if it is ^^ haha i feel bad fer gabe lol
sexyass story!
10/10
~DOLLFACE

Aw, this is one of the best stories I've ever read, EVER! ^^ I love it. It's so cute and so utterly sexy at the same time! Great job. There's no way to describe how much I love this.

Gorgeous story. :) I'm sad that it hasn't been updated in a year when you say there's still two chapters left, but I think this is a good ending point. I won't die from not knowing what happens. :)

Ah! Darling, it was getting so very good! I love your writing style...not so much that it ended so abruptly. Please write some...MORE! (Before I go insane...well okay, I admit I'm already insane, but I guess I could get more insane if you don't hurry or something.) Anyway, good work thus far!

Wes

why won't you update this?? ahh, please, I love this story.
Em

You stopped the story. Please try to continue,. Thanks:)

ZL

I must say, I love them, despite how cruel and uncaring they both seem to be at times. WEll, i must admit, I've always had a thing for bastards. Ive been in love with Draco Malfoy and Snape since I first read the HP books...HAHA...But i seriously love this book. I can really understand them...when there is only one person who completely understands you, even if at times you dont feel as if you LIKE them much, you do love them, without even realizing it. Anyway, I absolutely adore this story; you did a terrific job, and I really hope you update the rest of it (and quite possibly make a sequel...*BEGS* As it is absolutely beautiful. I like Val, also, by the way. WHen you first introduced him, I wasn't his biggest fan, truthfully, just because he wasn't the main character, so we really didn't understand him, and he was a jerk. And for God's sake, he was sleeping with both of them! LOL. But I would really love to blame Gabe for this whole situation, but I really can't...he really didn't mean to get into this, and none of it is really his fault, though in a way it seems as if he's trying to separate the two from each other almost.
Truthfully, it sounds horrible, but to me it seems as if most of the thing was caused, courtesy of Adam. He was the one that went with Gabe in the first place, refused to admit that they had anything, was no longer there the way that Marc needed him to be...I don't know, its just...when he realized that Marc was in love with him, and then ignored it, instead went running to Gabe...normal reaction, i know, when you hear him ** in the room next door, but still...it makes you really want to bash his pretty head in, deson't it? Anyway, terrific job, as i said, can't wait tor ead more!

My god i need you to update soon, as in now. I love this story, Adam and Marc are such bastards XD but i really like them and together they're so sweet. I feel sorry for Gabe though, poor guy. AND i love Val, he's awesome. Update soon! =]

That was perfect. You write so well and manage to portray the two main characters so beautifully yet realistically. They are such a cool couple. Please continue soon! For some strange reason I didn't put this on my favourites list before, but I'm off to change that now!

I love it! I really do, but out of curiousity, what is going to happen with the whole GABE sitch now?

Another great story. You're an amazing writer.

Oh my gosh. this is possibly my favorite story that i have read yet on fictionpress.

god i love this story. its awsome.

omg. this is awsome. i love it so far