i can see this poem really shows how you are feeling my mom has been sick ever since i have a memory and its a really bad desease. i wish you didn't have to go through this sickness i really do.

Aww *hugs* This is really sad and makes me all teary eyed. You describe yourself well. A truly great write my

chronic fatigue syndrome isn't a wonderful thing to go through.. I have two close friends that have this illness..

thank you for sharing your feelings and your illness with us that wish to understand. .. Good poem..

Great poem. You express your own pain - emotional and physical on the topic of your illness. Another great aspect of this poem is that it relates to others as well; an angsty poem about a broken heart. I love the lines "Muscles tangled and twisted/It hurts to be alive." Very Powerful stuff! :D