 eraced 2005-09-09 . chapter 1i like it it's kind of sutaly deep. Keep writing.
look into my scared eyes refection from the other side. |
 incandescent.smiles 2005-02-01 . chapter 1i like this quite a bit, and tori (midget...the squirrels! inside joke...:D) says she thanks you for the reviews. maybe you could review some of mine *hint hint nudge*. well once again, great job.
~leila* |
 Werewolf Nighteyes 2005-01-29 . chapter 1Nice. It's great when we have good friends that care about us, and somehow this poem reflects that you're a very caring person. Your friends must be really lucky! Keep it up! |
 AllyCred 2005-01-29 . chapter 1good...short but very powerful...really enjoyed reading this...kinda reminded me of myself for some weird reason...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 Julie Poe 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Awesome poem! Definitely going on favorites, it just made me feel so much. I loved this line the most "With her blue side a darker shade each day" Keep on going! |
 simpleplan13 2004-11-18 . chapter 1Look out now, that sides coming... side's
Very nice metaphor I like it a lot |