i like it it's kind of sutaly deep. Keep writing.

look into my scared eyes refection from the other side.

i like this quite a bit, and tori (midget...the squirrels! inside joke...:D) says she thanks you for the reviews. maybe you could review some of mine *hint hint nudge*. well once again, great job.

~leila*

Nice. It's great when we have good friends that care about us, and somehow this poem reflects that you're a very caring person. Your friends must be really lucky! Keep it up!

good...short but very powerful...really enjoyed reading this...kinda reminded me of myself for some weird reason...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Awesome poem! Definitely going on favorites, it just made me feel so much. I loved this line the most "With her blue side a darker shade each day" Keep on going!

Look out now, that sides coming... side's

Very nice metaphor I like it a lot