 aquamoon222 2005-02-19 . chapter 1Very true, I can totally relate! Very nice, though the ending could have been better! |
 AllyCred 2005-01-29 . chapter 1nice...it could have been a little bit longer and the flow could have been a bit better...but other than that i love it...nicely done...very well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 TaschaBear 2004-12-19 . chapter 1I HAVE SOMEONE LIKE THAT IN MY SCHOOL!OH MY GOD!
It bugs me sometimes i swear! *growls*
Anyway, good poem!
Nessa |
 pandora505 2004-12-12 . chapter 1I like it. The earlier parts are all like the person is watching her, but then in the end they can't just observe. |
 Julie Poe 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Very cool. Love the supernova imagery. What inspired this? Or to be more exact, who? |
 simpleplan13 2004-11-18 . chapter 1I like it.. awesome descriptions and that ending is cool.. tahnks for your review! |
 Syrins 2004-11-18 . chapter 1the end was kinda rush, but I really liked the words you used and how you used them. Great job! |