aw, that was pretty and sad, i wish i knew more about the people and the situation exactly though, i enjoyed either way, nicely done

Cool.
Storylets are fun.
The very begining of this reminded me of something I wrote and should post. Hm, haven't done that for quite a long time.

If you want an actual critisism, I'll give it. If not, just know I read it and enjoyed it. :)

nice, and very cute...

That's really good. Very well written.
Time for lunch...