Nice poem, I liked it, and I haven't much more to say 'cause it was just that great.-Rae

seriously alex, this is just great! i know how you feel, and this poem is really powerful and you describe how you're feeling really well. love it.. and you of course.. luv ya!Love Zai

its cool how a simple thing (ie; lokkin out a window) can turn into such a good poem!

This is excellent, yet another great work, keep it up

Love you

Keith Andrew