Intersting...it flowed amrvelously..The alst line is abrupt but leaves an aftertaste. keepw riting =D

I like you're style. Well done again. (I'm useless at reviews!)

Jenna xoxo

I think this is pretty different than anything else you've done before. but a very, very good different.

It works...and I'm glad you have your own style. Far too often people try to emulate Poe when they want to write gothic poetry, and that just doesn't work. This however...this seems nice. It could use a bit more description in some places, but other than that, everything is just peachy. I wanted it to be longer, but oh well.