Oh, what a great story! I really enjoyed it, especially the characters and the plot twists. I was sort-of hoping that Iye would opt to stay on Earth instead, but the ending was still good.

*claps hands* Yay, it's done! Mind you it ended quite a bit faster than I thought it would, but beggers can't be choosers huh? The story was good... but I bet Muse isn't too happy about how it ended. I can just imagine him jumping up and down in frustration because he didn't get his romance... not even a sappy ending for him... the poor guy. Anyway, I'm off to read other stories!

Toodles!

Chade AKA J-chan

...sadly, that cahpter was...a bit disappointing. of course that could be because i was especting some sort of major climax battle at the end...but i suppose that last scene with Tal was the climax (very good scene.) this ending was a bit too detatched for my liking, after getting to know the characters so well, it was almost as if i didn't get to say goodbye properly. then again, now knowing that a major climax battle was never in the picture...i suppose this ending is acceptable...dragging out would have made it boring. anyway grats on a story well told (from now on try my hardest not to speculate on the ending..please do keep writing!)

ok, that was a great chapter! however, i think the jump from the attic to the greeting of cyrus was too sudden. t'was rather a jolt. perhaps fill it in with minor narration. Iye wakes Nila (who gives a cranky response...irritated at the least) they go down stairs and reach the entrance hall just as cyrus comes in...or something...other than that it was good!...now in other business...the next chapter had better be LONG! T.T it can't be over so soon!! no! (i'll flame you too, darn it!)

YOU just didn't want to let muse have his romance, that's why you're ending it so soon... aside from the fact you never really thought that the story would get so long. It turned out kinda like the Janay story huh?

Anyway, letting you know that I like the story and it WAS a neat way to end it... though I'm still thinking about flaming about the ending... maybe later when I'm not so bloody tired from work.

Ta-ta now!

ah, suspense strikes again! very good filler-type chapter. i just love the 'voice' of your writing and how well everything flows. the only thing i see that could be improved upon is:

"She could hope." changed to:

"She could only hope." - i asume this is what you meant to write and forgot a word - but maybe im just used to hearing it with the 'only' in there or something.anyway, great job!! update soon! ^^v

Curse you and leaving the chapter as a clifhanger!! Grr... and honestly, if Iye asked to accompany me to bed, I wouldn't know what to think OR say...Though, you left it off in a rather SUGGESTIVE spot...^_~ If you don't watch it, Muse might have his way yet!

Like I said before in my other review... you should have killed Tal damnit! He deserved it!

^_^ Ja!

*squee!* i loved this chapter! it was soo good!...i wish i had something more costructive to say...but i truely can't think of anything!! ^^v good work! keep it commin!

Tal should die a horrible, horrible death! Iye should kill him... Oh! Better yet, Nila should kill him. Ms. Thorne is gonna die anyway, so let Tal die! I don't like him. He seems like the kind of guy that only wants to overthrow the government so that HE can take over. It just seems that his reasons are a bit more selfish than actually wanting to get rid of the threat to humans. He seems kinda like OZ... you know what I mean don't you?

So my vote is that he should DIE!

^_^ Toodles!

J

oh! The plot thickens!

i like Iye!

I TOLD you I would get around to reading this! ^_^ Good Chappy chickie! And you still didn't give poor Ms. Thorne a name? Poor nameless... though she does kinda remind me of two certain someones from a certain anime that we used to watch, but that could just be becuase I'm obsessed with the danged thing... anyhoo... story is good so far and you should expect to see more reviews for each chapter... that is if they let me... I have to go back and finish reviewing your others as well...

Toodles!

WAI!! ^_^ i luved this chapter! i hope Iye kills him! slow and painfully! he's an evil evil man...then again...Ms. Thorne's a smart woman...perhaps she has good reason for what she said...nah anyways, very good job! write quickly please!

*fumes* what i jerk! i hope his death is slow and painful! write more soon! i want to know what will happen to iye!