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Reviews For: Salvation in the City

Death by Night
2004-11-18
ch 1,
abuseTres bien. And if you don't speak french, that meant very good (haha). Gets the point across. Maybe life 20 years ago was just one big project.
~DBN
Make me with Beautiful Line...
2004-11-18
ch 1,
abusewow i really loved this. i advise that you change the summary to say sumfin more like ' a satire on religion' sumfin like that, cuz as it is, i almost didnt read it for fear of one of the angry religion-basher things (no offense to those, but it gets repeatitive) i really like this tho. i love how it is worded. great job!
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