XD, what a meanie!
update soon!

YAY! YOU POSTED! Honestly, that guy Ian should get a life. What's his specialty? Harassing other people that mean no harm? Sad;y this happens in reality lol. GREAT JOB! I'm lovin' it

Its really good that you appreciate reviews you recieve. some story I just read, she was expecting 10 more reviews before she updated again.

But I do believe you have talent. Sure I get ideas that pop into my head, but not that great written in my hand. I always use myself as a basis for a character, or a friend. it's a lot simpler than coming up with an 'original' person. lol.

write soon I hope!

mwhahahaha. I can totally relate to Alena. My god, your awesome. =)

awsome i think it's cool the way you descibed the way that she felt and lived even though you were evading the reason she did not want to re live the past adding suspence and mystery as well as a scence of honesty

awsome keep it up

I really like this so far. you have a great writing skill. one I need. but yea. I am connecting well with Alena, and it's only the first chapter.

WOW! THIS IS GOOD! UPDATE UPDATE! ^_^