Reviews for Jabberwocky: Revisited

Choleric Mist 2005-02-14 ch 1,	abuseLOL! Haha, that's brilliant! Very hilarious... I just had to rewrite the jabberwocky poem for a class, that's why I checked this out. lol, very talented and creative- I loved it!
EternalSummer 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abuse::claps:: Lewis Carroll! (sorry... the mere mention of his name makes me giddy.) I really like what you've done here... You managed to create a plot quite independent from the original poem, and still maintain the wonderful tone which permeates "Jabberwocky." Your imagery and language are extraordinary! Great job! btw, thanks for your kind reviews of my poems. Besides stuff I had written for school now and again, I just started writing poetry over this summer. It's so encouraging to get praise from fellow writers, especially one as talented as you! Have you written any other poems? ::decides to check:: Anyways, toodles!
Ever 2004-11-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseLOVE IT! :PBest bit is definately:The Principal, whose eyes had frames,Came stomping through, past my classmate,And glared at him as it came!He left it dead, and with its headHe went triumphing back. :) :) :P THe only little thing I might have changed would have to be: "ANd have you slain the Principal? Come to my arms, my darling boy." Instead of "intellectual boy" which didn't seem to fit. You know? KEEP IT UP!