I love this!

Take that little snowflake! being unfriendly makes you all slushy!

*does little dance in street*

The rhyming you have gives it an extra push at certain parts. Very nice. Muwha.

This sounds like a children's book. We could totally write it too! "There once was a snowflake..." Yeah! ::Grin:: Or maybe I'll just write it cuz I need to write something.

Ooh, I like. Very much. I'd like to see some of the preps at my school who think like that turn into gutter slush. _

whoa! great poem! i can see the symbolism, its barely hidden... but i actually like that! it's too true about life in general. thanks for writing!