correct me if i'm wrong but, is the theme of this poem about finding one's self or trying to find one's own definition? or maybe that's just me again.

aw! sad but true! i totally can relate :) diz girl rockz!

It's got an excellent tone to it. However, the last line has a subject-verb agreement problem and a more regular rhythm would aid the continuity. All the same, keep writing and you'll be surprised where your passions take you. Good luck! *Mettie*