likes it:D:D:D

Very interesting these different styles. The one thing I want is seperate stanzas... damn fictionpress formating. Anyway interesting.

-Stones decay, words lastNick

Good experimenting techniques. I think that's something we all need to do once in a while. "like a split seam in my throat" ouch, wicked simile. Nicely done I must say.

Jenna xoxo

I can see some influences, but we're all influenced by something, aren't we? I liked it, I think you did a fine job!

That was a mighty behemoth of a poem. Strong images, made me feel physically sick.Really nice vocab, and original descriptions of CONFUSION.

Maybe I'm not very good with poetry, but I really don't understand it. I see this poem as very interpretive, so that's a very good thing. I'm only one person. I would be careful about some slight mistakes with parenthesis usage, but that may be your style. There is also two cases of questionable word usage and spelling. Those being "thorny" and "mydnight". But otherwise, an interesting poem. Keep up the good work!