"The tears were rolling off her face now and it was obvious that, under any other circumstance, she would not be doing what she was about to."

No commas necessary there.

"...since He last ate something..."

He doesn't need to be capitalized.

Teehee. Should I continue? If you need a beta for gramatics, I could do it for you. Meep. We shall see.

It was kinda hard to tell whether the story was set in Japan or America at first, but that got cleared up later.

great story

I like the storyline and of course the inclution of kitsunes. I just have heard of kitsunes being more of spirits than deamons.

Holy crap, I finally found it! WOOT! Ok, anyways, it's damm good! Update soon, or I will be forced to hurt you. :)

Oh wow. I really like this! *thumbs up* Keep up the good work!>^_^<~kitsune

Kewl beans! Update soon, m'kay?