Nicely done. This is something so many people can relate to, including myself.

It's almost scary how much that poem relates to my life. It's AWESOME. If thats how you feel you might want to check out my poem 'beneath the sea'. I basically tried to express the same feeling but you described it better. keep writin'

i can totally relate to this. no one knows who you are, who are you, who am i, why cant people see us for ourselves? i know the feeling.

Love. it. Reminds me of..me. ; Good job. Deep. Revealing. True. w00t. I will read more later (I'm at school...). Only problem I found was this: "I brake the mirror on the ground,"Wrong break. Thats like the one in the car. ; thats all. Good job again!

*Breeze*

Aw wow,that was beautiful!I loved it )

Lovely poem once again. Very nice descriptions. Keep up the lovely work!

Not noticing pass the appearance,... passedAs I gaze into the frail girls eyes,...girl's

I know that feeling... very awesome ending

Hey that was great _ loved it keep it up!

Again I neglect your work ! Passionate and beautiful Gothic ! Keep up the good work !

Noelle

Powerful and passionate.

I like it, keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.