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| Fawne 2006-11-19 ch 1,  | abuseoh...my. The disturbing thing is, my friends and I are planning a roadtrip. SOON. The story is putting me off the idea... But despite that, this story was exceedingly well written. Je l'aime! |
| Genuinely-xoxo-Superficial 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseNice tone, surreal, vgood for a 1 hr short story! |
| mo 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseit can be so used for final destination 3 :) freaky, so not ur lovely typical story |
| Scarlet Sins 2004-11-21 ch 1, | abuseHoly crap, Sandy! I just got back from home (to waterloo of course) and was worried the whole time about getting into a car accident. Plus, whenever I'm here at school and I know my mom, my dad, and my sister are driving home, I get totally freaked out that something could happen to them! lol But that's beside the point. I love the ending of course, it's ME. And yes, how could it NOT remind me of us? lol are you trying to put me off the roadtrip idea? Too bad! I'm still taking all of you with me! Anyway, I love the end, how it builds up and then almost gives us relief...but then something hits us! *sigh* Love it =) |
| Kezza 2004-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was pretty good, definetley differetn from your others but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Keep up the good work. |
| Jazzy Kitty 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseHey there. I enjoyed this. You're right - it is quite different from what you usually write (all the romance stuff), but I'm glad you decided to take a break and write this out. I think it's definitly a worthwhile read. I always really love reading your writing because it's so descriptive - I caught a few nice similes, metaphors, and other literary devices, etc etc. You use them very effectively. I thought this was really interesting... I don't know if you intended it to be this way or not, but when I finished reading I was left with a strangely empty feeling. Nice job, I liked this. |
| happyeverafter 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm continualy surpriced in how one person can describe things as well as you do. This story was so short, but you still made me see and fell what those young persons felt and also well, I felt the story deeply. |