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| MelGrl 2007-10-05 ch 23,  | abuse...wow... that was so...wow.. You can defintely write. High praises. |
| anon 2007-09-09 ch 19, anon. | abuseAll I can say is EDIT. It's difficult to read when every other line has errors. |
| behind these tears 2007-03-24 ch 23, | abuseOMG! I can't believe the didn't end up together. *Cries* Even though there wasn't a really happy ending, this story was still good. Keep up the good work! Take care! |
| behind these tears 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI already love your story! I love how you started it with the ‘once upon a time’ theory. You’re so right! K, off to the next chapter! |
| siddika 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGOOD STORY. |
| youpin 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGood story. |
| peacerocker 2006-12-01 ch 23, | abuseA rather sad story but nevertheless beautiful. I would not want another ending either. This ending seems the most perfect. Other stories, when they have a sad ending it makes me feel that i have read it in vain but urs, it really fits it perfectly well. I hope u will write another story soon |
| karen 2006-10-06 ch 24, anon. | abusewel that...was a bittersweet ending. by far one of the most intense stories ever that i can definately relate to in some ways...i wish u could make a sequel and make it where lewis and conrad have a happy ending but if not then oh well i guess |
| UbiquityEssence 2006-08-23 ch 19, | abusewow |
| UbiquityEssence 2006-08-22 ch 16, | abusedrama! |
| jaroflies 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was..incredible! I loved the ending, the cliche happily ever after isn't always realistic. And even though you've left it so that its possible for a sequel...i'm glad you're not doing one..its perfect just the way it is :D LaterRach |
| Fairytale Gurl 2006-06-23 ch 7, | abuseokay i'm gonna continue reading but so far it's tres tres tres good:) |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2006-06-15 ch 23, | abusegewd story...i didnt understand a lot of it though...it still confuses...but i think it was really deep...i was sad at first when you didnt make aidan and raissa end up together, but i now understand why you did it. |
| Crewger 2006-06-08 ch 23, | abuseI actually like the ending, very original, like the other one where both of them died in a car crash. Nice story! Most people don't put in as much drama as you do!! ^0^ |
| dramaqueen89 2006-06-03 ch 23, anon. | abuseaww.. it makes me sad that they didnt end up together.. but i guess it was for the best.. |