Reviews for The Massive Invasion

The Crimson Angel Of Time 2005-04-21 ch 7,	abuseYou know what? I gotta admit that I'm quite proud of this story.
Cribo_the_possum 2004-11-25 ch 5, anon.	abuseNice writing. The story moves along at a fair pace which doesn't run off or lag at certain points, which most of the authors on FP have a habit of doing. Nice way to keep everything in perspective on how everyone is adapting to this aptly named Hell Day. The Aranaii seem essentialy relentless to get rid of the humans, but let us guess: there's a faction in there somewhere, or is that giving away too much of the plot? Liked the story though, so great job.
Nikko 2004-11-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseHm, this is tight & worth the read, needs some more action I think, but overall not bad at all. I particularly like the interaction between Saalis and Adj. Commander Syeil. It's almost as if she likes him but dares not approach him at the same time. But it's good reading, so keep it up.