It deeply interests me - but you didnt give enough info.. rather confusing. I don't know who the characters are.. is there a break between the kiss and the person talking to the doctor? Besides my confusion I enjoyed this.

^^ yay! Lynn-chan wrote a story. This was different and I like the way the point of view was written. it was a bit confusing with the begining and soon I got the idea that it was a dream. very lovly ^^ yay, cookies for you!

Eh.. I thought it was a bit... confusing, actually. But that aside... it's *so* cute ! ^_^ Nice job ^^

*hugs you back*