Whoa! Amazing. There's so much emotion in your words. I really the sense of trying to break free from insanity. It really shows that there is still a small amount of human will let to resist. ;) Awesome job. I really enjoyed reading your poems. ^__^

This is amazing work. Sad story, but you tell it with advanced skill. Excellent work.

-P.G.

that was really beautifulsorry i can't say that there was anything i could see wrong with itbecause i know how helpful that isbut it was really very beautiful

You really are good. I love the ABAB style. It flows really well with your poems.