Nice usage of Imagery and a hint of Edgar Alan Poe (Annabela Lee, one of my favs). Keep up the good work.

that was BEAUTIFUL. Amazing. Visual... and just one of the best pieces i have read. If you really feel like this about the guy and would write something so great, then you have something real special, I almost envy you. I loved the poem, that's all i can say. Everything you did was right.