|Reviews for Wilted Innocence|
| wheres my cheese 11/27/04 . chapter 7
wow AWESOME story! im only on chapter six - leston and ryann hav got it going man! its not everyday you find a story like thiswrite more soon!
| chipmonkey223 11/27/04 . chapter 11
heylove ur story its got great potential!update soon!
| Zire 11/27/04 . chapter 12
LOVE IT tho its confusing but whatever! update soon man!
| Pigment of Your Imagination 11/26/04 . chapter 11
haha. aw! wish i was around 19 right now. hehe. Ryann has softened! Yup! Still mentally drooling over him. Course, wish Ryann would bonk on the head everyonce in a while to remind him. haha. hope u write soon! you made me hooked!
| Nina 11/26/04 . chapter 10
hey pam! love your story so far.. u told me sum ppl found it confusing, but i dont. um noe that i told u that there are some typing errors... well juz reminding..love the end of the last chapter! breakfast.. hehehehe.. looking forward to the next chapter!
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 11/26/04 . chapter 10
Wow, your story is really good! I don't think I like Hannah very much...well duh, she's a horrible person. Ahem, ANYWAY, good job and thanks for reviewing! :D:D Update soon!
| Pigment of Your Imagination 11/25/04 . chapter 9
aw! that's so sweet! Leston sounds like a mischief, troublemaker! write soon!
| chiridreams 11/25/04 . chapter 10
haha. that's really cute! Leston cracks me up so much! Especially when he gives that amused smirk/grin of his. And i absolutely love the duke! i bset that's where leston gets his mischief. haha. hope u'll update soon!
| One Desire 11/24/04 . chapter 9
i think its brilliant so far...just take in consideration of my suggestion on my last review...keep up the good work and i hope to see more of this story.
| One Desire 11/24/04 . chapter 5
umm...i actually disagree with that other reviewer who said stop using "big words"...big words make you a better writer and make you sound more intelligent...but use OTHER words...example: you use the phrase "her lips curled" much too aften and instead of "alight" use "dismount" use a thesaraus, clever things.
| One Desire 11/24/04 . chapter 1
so far, i love the detail and the emotion. It also helps that I love these kind of plots.
| Nina 11/24/04 . chapter 1
hello! i have only read the prologue, but the story seems really cool! i really love the way you do your thing... i noe i mentioned this in cless, but just to remind you, Ryann reminds me a lot of Seann... from W17.. which you btw should put up 2..ill give another review when i finished the story.
| Elle Knight 11/23/04 . chapter 7
Your story has an excellent plot! I will admit that I was a bit confused at times, but overall the plot was intriguing. Keep up the good work and write more soon!
| Raygirl 11/21/04 . chapter 1
I love your story even though i may have only read the prologue! What will happen! You should get this published and I mean it!
| tasch 11/20/04 . chapter 1
fantastic! i like this chapter really good at expressing yourself,well done man and good luck with it! lots of love tasch x x x