wow AWESOME story! im only on chapter six - leston and ryann hav got it going man! its not everyday you find a story like thiswrite more soon!

-alix

heylove ur story its got great potential!update soon!

LOVE IT tho its confusing but whatever! update soon man!

-pico ;-)

haha. aw! wish i was around 19 right now. hehe. Ryann has softened! Yup! Still mentally drooling over him. Course, wish Ryann would bonk on the head everyonce in a while to remind him. haha. hope u write soon! you made me hooked!

hey pam! love your story so far.. u told me sum ppl found it confusing, but i dont. um noe that i told u that there are some typing errors... well juz reminding..love the end of the last chapter! breakfast.. hehehehe.. looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow, your story is really good! I don't think I like Hannah very much...well duh, she's a horrible person. Ahem, ANYWAY, good job and thanks for reviewing! :D:D Update soon!

aw! that's so sweet! Leston sounds like a mischief, troublemaker! write soon!

haha. that's really cute! Leston cracks me up so much! Especially when he gives that amused smirk/grin of his. And i absolutely love the duke! i bset that's where leston gets his mischief. haha. hope u'll update soon!

i think its brilliant so far...just take in consideration of my suggestion on my last review...keep up the good work and i hope to see more of this story.

umm...i actually disagree with that other reviewer who said stop using "big words"...big words make you a better writer and make you sound more intelligent...but use OTHER words...example: you use the phrase "her lips curled" much too aften and instead of "alight" use "dismount" use a thesaraus, clever things.

so far, i love the detail and the emotion. It also helps that I love these kind of plots.

hello! i have only read the prologue, but the story seems really cool! i really love the way you do your thing... i noe i mentioned this in cless, but just to remind you, Ryann reminds me a lot of Seann... from W17.. which you btw should put up 2..ill give another review when i finished the story.

Your story has an excellent plot! I will admit that I was a bit confused at times, but overall the plot was intriguing. Keep up the good work and write more soon!

I love your story even though i may have only read the prologue! What will happen! You should get this published and I mean it!

fantastic! i like this chapter really good at expressing yourself,well done man and good luck with it! lots of love tasch x x x