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| Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou captured the emotion in this piece. It wonderfully written. A...piece of art(?). I like how you compared the hope and the loss of hope to the River. So far this is my favorite but I can't really say because at the moment I'm going through all of your poems and reviewing. |
| Luna-Faye 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseNice. I always like poems including water (well, most of the time). It is not extraordinary good but it isn't bad either. Lot's of feelings, that's always good. |