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Reviews For: The End

Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-13 ch 1,	abuseOh my god. Wow. I really really like this one. "The End" and "River". Wonderful. It says little but means so much. You get to the point but you held all the feeling. I would say emotion but I can't picture myself screaming or smiling to this. I still like it though.
Unholy Haven 2005-03-29 ch 1,	abuseGood!
ColdFrost 2005-03-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is very powerful. The repetition of no one... is very effective. A great poem - am adding it to my fav. list. ~ColdFrost
writtenbyrandom 2004-12-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is faintly reminiscent of the lyrics to Korn's 'Daddy.' You can take that however you want, but I meant it as a compliment (that is one powerful song). The lines are simple but provocative; good job.
Malicious Scars 2004-11-24 ch 1,	abuseO! Yay! Love me forever! This is so cool! The _ and then no one _ repetition thing is fabulous. In my head it's got this really irrepresable, pounding rhythm. Strong. Resounding throuhgout my cranium! I can't believe it didn't have any reviews. The line "I die, No one cares." is my favorite. It REALLY is the end. More! (Btw, thanks for the very kind and uplifting review on "Me and you? How about US." I heart you too.)Scars