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| Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an awesome piece. "Her speech was clear, but space echoed in her eyes." You definitely have a talent for painting pictures with words. I could actually imagine myself there. I have a poem called For Michael about losing my brother, so I really relate to this mother's loss. Write on...Kat |
| grim-dreamer 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuse"She played her memories in a cinema" and "Her voice was clear, but space echoed in her eyes" caught my specific attention. Curious how the poem it arranged like prose. Death is a loss. |
| Fiery Secrets of My Heart 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good. I love this. Especially how you just managed to put all of this into words...the memories, the emotions..they're amazing. Keep writing~ you're a true writer. |
| Wednesday the 16th 2004-11-21 ch 1, | abusethis is a real tear jerker... wow i feel so midwestern for saying that. very good i applaud your literary genius. |
| Blargh213213 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusewow. such strong emotion in so few words. This piece is very moving and I love the title. I was recently visiting Arlington National Cemetary and it was amazing how the graves were often seen only as a number, a quantity, and not for the lives they represent. |
| Mormon Princess 1 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Ilike it a lot. |
| Birdaloo 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. honestly and truly beautiful. i love how a story so short can display such strong emotions and memories! AMAZING write! im truly impressed! ~Birdy |