 Adrian Clyde 2005-02-16 . chapter 8Gina seems like such a nice girl, although a little naive. "I want to be just like you,"lol. Cute. I want to know what happens next, and how "grown" Gina will be like.~*Garrey*~ |
 invalid id 2005-02-13 . chapter 8A mint green sighting! :D That's gotta so be your fave colour. I'm glad you updated, this was a great chapter. You doa great job of making Gina innocent and curious, yet not to an annoying level. I also love how Kasey feels towards her, especially after reading all these other stories, it's interesting to see her be affected in this way, not even Roswell can do that, well not as much as Gina lol. Great work Kasey! Keep writing! (And review my last song please? :D) |
 Professor Doctor 2005-01-21 . chapter 7Coolish. |
 Adrian Clyde 2005-01-18 . chapter 7Kasey!You updated!Finally. j/k""Mama, I want that."LOL!That line had me rollin'. I like Gina. I find her hilarious. The thing with her is that she's so unintentially evil but sweet at the same time. I wanna see where you go with this.
~*Crazy Baiko*~
(P.S. Kasey referring humans as "toys" made me laugh also. lol."These toys are easily broken." LOL!) |
 invalid id 2005-01-15 . chapter 7Well worth the wait of a new chapter. I think this was great. You really get into the heads of your characters. You describe it so well, you use great detail and description. This chapter was a great one, love the angelic devil that Gina is. So sweet, yet so deadly. Love how Kasey tries to resist the bond but falls into it. You don't make spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes either! I really love your stories and think you're the best writer on the site. NEVER STOP WRITING! |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-12-12 . chapter 6nice! you seem to have a theme going, lol! obviously. nice writing! |
 Adrian Clyde 2004-12-09 . chapter 6KASEY IS BACK! I loved her sarcasm. "But on a serious level, let's keep it G Rated. She's too young to hear about your 'randy days'." LOL! G-Rated. LOL!
I think that Amos will use Gina as the "new Kassia". Since he raised Kasey as a child, and she grew up, and Kasey wouldn't let him get close to Kassia, he wants to try again to raise a child. And since Gina is a vampire, he think he can raise her forever. I think that Gina will grow up metally, and become a killing machine, or, she'll become cold like Kasey. I guess I'll see soon. :) I really like Gina. She's such a good child.~*Crazy Baiko*~ |
 invalid id 2004-12-07 . chapter 6Lol, you so lied! Hmm, I liked how GIna understands the vampire entendres and doesn't. I also like how she and Amos have that family bond. I think Amos is getting to get that kind of child like admiration he once got from Kassia. It's pretty cool too how he got teased by Kasey instead of her usual snappiness at him. Slow development, but that usually means it gets better as it goes which is a good tactic. You're really good at writing a story and you've done it so many ways (which is good, b/c you don't want to do it the same way everytime). Good work and keep it up.
And to keep it well-rounded: You misspelled hand in the 6th para and marry should be merry. |
 Adrian Clyde 2004-12-07 . chapter 5Gina is so sweet, I like her. What Roswell did, while nice, was really stupid, and I'm surprised Kasey didn't go completely off on him. Normally she would have. Speaking of which, she's been a lot calmer lately. I guess since living forever and ever is finally boring her, she just doesn't feel like arguing anymore. Time to read the next chapter. Oh, and where's Keegan? lol. Good work.~*Crazy Baiko*~ |
 invalid id 2004-12-05 . chapter 5A child vampire? How interesting and unique! I can't wait to see her feed, that's gonna be different, she can't reach the neck lol. Good work on this one, nice to see Kasey conflicted and you write it so well. |
 Adrian Clyde 2004-12-02 . chapter 4I'm reading this in my second period class, English, to be exact. lol. (My classes are 90 minutes long, and I have four of those, so...yeah, it's draining). Anyway, I'm picturing Gina in my head right now, and she seems really pretty...wow. I wonder what storylines Gina will be involved in, or better yet, her personality. lol. I wonder what is going through Kasey's mind right now. She wanted a child, and now she has one. Whether Roswell did a good or bad thing is unsure...Kasey being unpredictable and at times, very difficult, she'll probably yell at him first. *sigh* Gina only reminds me of how great Kassia was...I miss her. *goes to read TTBEOK*Update soon!(PS: My computer is going really slow lately, thanks to my dad, so updates might be a little slower than usual. It should be fixed soon...hopefully)Wow...I need to get to work...it's 10:01 and class is over in another...44 minutes. -_- ~*Crazy Baiko*~ |
 invalid id 2004-11-30 . chapter 4Another mint green reference! Lol this was a nice chapter to bring about Gina, I cannot wait for Kasey's reaction in the next chapter. Good work (BTW little was misspelled in your story, gotta critique well roundedly now :P) |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-11-26 . chapter 3this seems to be going qite well. nice writing! |
 Adrian Clyde 2004-11-25 . chapter 3Definitely not boring. This chapter was highly necessary. I understand what Kasey is going through. Doing the same over and over and over would make anyone bored with living. I wonder "surprise" Roswell have for Kasey. I don't know...but I think it's a puppy...
~*Crazy Baiko*~ |
 invalid id 2004-11-24 . chapter 3No, this wasn't boring. This was a pretty good chapter. I really liked it. Lol and can't wait to see his surprise for Kasey. You do a great job of developing her character. |