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| teh tarik 2006-10-26 ch 1,  | abusethe best rhyming poem ever i've come across in this whole place. I can't pick a favourite line, they were all brilliant, & the wonderful use of rhyme enhanced everything. this has to go on my faves. |
| Jezsh 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abusepowerful and magical...I love the progression from the clouds to the broader deeper more personal questions. The way it rhymes is also really interesting, I like that. |
| a lonely september 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseohmygod. this was purely amazing. i have never read anything like it. it was so beautiful, so professional... &the ending was so amazing. you rock. |
| addie pray 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, especially "the wrath of an age/sealed with Lucifer's breath". Lovely imagery here. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abusevery...just. honestly it was something brilliant. |
| romancingthemoon 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseA proper use of rhyming is so effective, yet rarely can anyone manange to do it. I have lots of trouble rhyming. You have yet again laced words together into something effulgent. |
| the cereal killer 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseGod I missed your writing. "We wept till the marrowwas nought but clean sandfilling the glassof our bones"Wonderful. And the form/structure; you are an awesome story-teller. (spitfired here.) |
| insertterriblypoeticlineher... 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseVery impressive - I enjoyed this immensely. Despite a few errors (spelling?), your grammar was good. 'Parchment rain,' definately gave the feel of something frayed along the edges. And then by the end there's this sort of chaos, what with the rejection and sort of hopelessness you feel with being lost. Superb word choice. This seemed to take a while to come, but it was worth waiting for. Good job. |
| Ashley D. Porter 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseAnd I had thought you dead from the lack of poetry flowing from you're account. Oh how I have missed your words!This is so beautiful with a vintage kind of beauty. Old and delicate mixed with young and coarse. Oh the stars, the stars. Oh how I love Michelangelo. -Oriana |