really like this poem a lot! keep it up...

I like it. There are a few lines in here in particular...Words of hidden love vanish from my lips

Killed by the hopeless hope for another’s loveI care too much to let him know

I care too much for him to love him

I love those 4 lines. Very good.

I like it. I've been browsing through the Just In's (Since I have nothing else better to do--I can't post things up yet). Maybe it's just me or the way I think, but your poem's got more in it then you see. Kind of like something you read and you have to think about. If I don't make sense, that's okay, atleast I understand myself. ^_^;; To make it simple, great job. Keep writing

Very good. I loved the details and the theme that you incorperated. It really sends the true message. You're right that it's angsty, but there is nothing wrong with that! Please take a look at my work sometime!