This very beautiful indeed yes its true that the world needs peace and you are showing that you care about your country in home. This is very remarkable. I've couldn't done it myself.

Enjoyed this poem. Love the title and just everything. The flow. The words.

ps- that story will not be that long, bcz I dont think I could make it. Maybe around 9-12 ch.

This is a really great poem-especially when you use the word twice! I think it would be easier to read though if you didn't have double spaces and instead had stanzas.

Very touching. Though many people I am sure agree with your poem, our world leaders refuse to let go of old arguments and feuds. Such is human nature. Peace is a beautiful thing. I only wish it was more common. Wonderful poem.

Wonderfully done, I also agree 100 percent and over. Keep writing!

I agree 100% Excellent write!

LRB