Gah! The imagery in this poetry, I loved it, because I could see it all playing out in my head! And I also liked the formatting - although not usually a fan of words being spaced:

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this

I find myself converted! And the message in this was so poignant!

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This is short but very well written and powerfull. Keep writing.

Wow. It's so short, yet so powerful. I liked the ambiguous nature of your work and how you communicated the theme is - again, wowing. I really enjoyed this!