 darqlyte 2005-02-27 . chapter 1Short. Not indepth or anything, but you sum it up to what love basiclly is, good job.
I especially like your last line, may I repost it with your permission?
God Bless.
-Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte |
 ThirteenSugars 2004-11-21 . chapter 1Ah, love. What's there to say about it? It's the most fatal disease there could possibly be. It not only makes you physically and mentally ill. It also makes you emotionally whacked. (lol)
Anyway, for the review, this is great...I know. I know. "Great" is just so cliched in this site. But this is really wonderful. ^^
The most notorious stalker of F.P.The most perverted untouched virgin,- Wicked Tongue |
 bob 2004-11-21 . chapter 1 tres cool paper. i totally agree with everything here, but before you can fall in love with anyone, all those bastards that is the male gender have to give you hell. death. |
 scudcrow 2004-11-21 . chapter 1You've written this fairly well and have voiced concerns that are seemingly impt. (to everyone). I must say that asking someone whether they "love you" or not is not being true to yourself. Whether you love someone or not is an internal question. It'd be nice if you include something along the lines of the "self", but the piece is good as is!
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 Cthulhu 2004-11-21 . chapter 1WARNING: LEVEL 5 SCHMALTZ ALERT |
 Ruthy 2004-11-21 . chapter 1its a well writen...i think if you really want to tell what love is you should go a little deeper and for it to be a little longer. love is more than just a feeling you have between 2 people, and the kind of love your talking about isnt something that somebodys going to feel for a boyfriend there going to have for just a week. thats called infatuation. you did write this well though. |