A lovely poem. Sad though. Write on! Oh! Thank you very much for reviewing me!

~Anna~

I enjoyed it. You have the gift of being able to rhymn in your poetry, something I have not been graced with. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work.-Black Rose

Wow... I love how you put all those words so beautifully together!! This poem -- Im putting on my favorite list!

-Lady Notorious

This is really good. I love the way it flows. Very depressing story though. Wish I had some one who would ride miles to see me.

This kinda reminds me of the myths of the sun and the moon. They're always chasing each other but only once in a very long time do they meet. Very nice!

"Does the walker choose the path, or the path the walker?"

beautiful, amazingly done-Keith Andrew

I love the way you described the moon : "Coming together for a moment, Then parting with turn of tide."I loved it, different from your usual but still very good!!

Keep it up!