Wow. This is so powerful, amazing. I am honestly moved.

Beautiful, just beautiful. It sounds like you're finally really happy. ^_^

heartwrenching, vivid, great movement and progression, dialectic resolution. The penultimate line is my favorite; it's like a beautiful moment in a painting that you can just get lost in. Your poetry is getting better and better. Keep it up.

Wow. Very wierd. Not the typical bonerifying sex poem either. shucks. But very good nonetheless.