:) lol. that was cool. very..er..original. :D got me laughin in a good way! heh. I liked your discription with the shadows and how fear crept into the main character. good job. :)R&R please!thanx!

That was so cool. You can't see it, but I'm laughing my ** off right now.

Do it again! Do it again!

Good...very original, I like. Keep writing, you have a great imagination! Keep up the awesome work (^_^)

Haha! That's a really imaginative story there! I like it - I don't think I've read an idea quite like it before. Nice job - keep writing!