Overall...OK. You have identified a variety of feelings and memories, and have put them together nicely. However, I feel that several phrases and words in this poem were merely used to maintain structure and rhyme scheme, and just don't flow with the main content material. Because of this, I don't feel a beauty and clarity in this poem, which in this case seems necessary. Interesting thoughts.

Very nice poem. Not as sappy and sad as I thought it would be, but very truthful.

A little too much repitition of the same thing, and a little too plain for my liking, but not bad to say the least.