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Reviews For: The Strange Room

Alcione Pendergast
2004-12-06
ch 1,
abuseNice poem, Necro. (Not sure if I've reviewed any of your stuff before, but if not, I'm sorry! I'm a fan, I promise.) I liked the poem itself, and the alternating caps also gave great effect. It felt very eerie. (Of course, I do believe it's due to the avid amout of horror games I play, and you do see many alternating passages like that. I don't know why, but that just creeps me out. Meep.)
SweetAcid
2004-11-26
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all, the font effect is extremely cool. Second, the poem itself is really good. It sounds very Edgar Allen Poe-ish. Maybe it's the way it sounds when you read it aloud, but that's the first thing that popped into my head.
Anime Freakizoid
2004-11-25
ch 1,
abusewow, the different font caught me by surprise! but i still think it's very well organized and dark. i noticed that i am a recommended authoress: THANK YOU! but i hope you can read some of my stories soon, my story Lament of Darkness will have shonen-ai in later chapters...keep up the wonderful work!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
Thunder Goddes Kino
2004-11-23
ch 1,
abuseOi there my lover-of-all-yaoi friend! ^_^ I just finished reading your new poem (As if that wasn't obvious enough, heh.) and I am telling you what I think. Sorry I had forgotten about it earlier! ;.; But, you know me and my memory.. *Sigh*

Anywayz, on about the poem for God sakes! (Or, in your case, Luicifer's case :P hehe just messin around with ya.) It was with no question excellent, just like all of your poems are. I particulary love it when you make it rhyme, for some reason it just...flows through my mind in some interesting way. (And by interesting, I don't mean dirty, just in case that thought came to your mind hehe.) The difference in caps and lower case letters makes it more unusual then most poems, and more fun to read. Good job Necro, I'll be back to bug ya in the review for your next poem! Ja ne!! ^_^
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