This is great.

That u for the review, it was very encouring. Im an american born paki, so majority of ur poem i understood... though the english writing make it kinda difficult to understand.

Im very impressed by how many languauges u posted. Keep up the great work.

Interesting poem and style. Very nice.

Very unique but I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great job!

well so cool that ur translating urdu are so wicked themselves,its cool that others can read em too now.