I like this story. Alot.

Please keep writing. Please. Pretty please.

Beautiful description at the beginning of the chapter. The scene is depicted well, and Euthenas' feelings can be clearly perceived. The battle between Euthenas and the boy was also well-done. When you make your reader's heart beat a little faster it's always a good sign. The transition between her sudden feelings of battle-lust and her concern and care for the boy was lovely to read.

You're continuing along brilliantly! This story is such a treat for me. I'm delighted with the way her father is behaving towards her now, though I am just a wee bit sorry for her, being exposed to this new, frightening world of weaponry and war. Keep on with the lovely work!

Wow i love this story i have been readijng it for a while its gr8 its gr8 2 see a female ruler instead of men all the time! update soon

My, the king is insistent on getting his way, and only time will tell if he's right about the training. This chapter has been very intense, enjoyably so. Now more than ever have you made it clear the throne is both a blessing and a curse. I can't wait to see her grow to adulthood with all this training, and see if she can balance her life with political and personal interests.

I love when you get into political subjects in this story, because one day these issues are going to shape the life of this princess. I'm glad you are not glamorizing this girl's life. I mean, she got attacked by that creepy Greek, all her brothers died, she has to study so much, (which is good, because that will make her a better ruler) and she has to prove that a female can rule. That can make the difference between a good and great story. You've already made the difference.

Um, I could be totally off, but you're not thinking of having her eventually have to marry ol' Phil, are you? If that be the case, could I make a tiny suggestion as a loyal reader? PLEASE, NO! Besides, an arranged marriage (even if not to the one I'm fearing) might make it too similiar to your other fabulous story, and so far you've been so successful at avoiding that. Like I said, I could be wrong, but I had to make sure I had my opinion on the record, just in case.

I am eagerly waiting to devour the next chapter, and may I just say I am glad you got a few other reviews. Some other opinions besides mine must be nice! LOL.

I like what you've got so far, keep up the good work please.

o i like this i read Classcis at college and i wish that it was as interesting as this! good wrk

Euthenas is really maturing, isn't she? Although she had not undergone a complete transformation from the girl we met in Ch 1, she has had enough to differences to take note of. Bravo, bravo on that! Do I sense some intruige about? Only to make the story better.

As an interesting a chapter as I had hoped. That little temper of Euthenas is always amusing. A very emotional young girl, which makes a vibrant character to read about. It's going to hit her hard when he get's executed by means of poisioning. Alexander...Alexander the Great?

What a perfect Holiday treat this is! I can't wait until the next chapter where this little princess will have an actual meeting with Aristotle. I love Arreatus's character, and his viewpoint. With his help Euthenas will be a fantastic queen indeed.

Have a great Holiday season!

LOL. Oh, that is great! I was so worried the king would kill himself, and now he's naming his daughter an heir. Yes! The uncle is such a jerk, I hope he dies later on. I can hardly wait to see events unfold from here. I love how you had their description from a child's view. I thought there was nothing to forgive you for here, everything was great.

Yey! This is really cool. Go Hieros! Go Hieros! *pretends to be a cheerleader and falls over* This story rocks. x x x Woona x x x

An eventful chapter, to say the least. From a child's confusion, to her father's final acceptance and love, to a scene of despair. Each one of the situations were painted fully. I assume her father is going to kill himself. You always leave a chapter with the reader wanting more.

Well, might I just say that you write well when you're in a hurry. I saw nothing obvious in the way of mistakes, so I wouldn't worry about it if I were you.

On an earlier review, someone said you heroine was a bit stereotypical, and at first, my dear, I agreed, but I've had a complete change of mind. The fact that she was willing to learn how to sew, and her desire to learn how to read, her hurt over her father's rejection, made me see her in a different light. Your main characters grows stronger as you go along.

That scene with the greek with just terrifying. You write that sort of thing very well. I just hope my blood pressure can take it!