  mahindra 2005-12-21 . chapter 1 ** ur good!! |
  dolce-gal 2005-07-28 . chapter 1Beautiful poem! The words flow so nicely. |
 youzi 2005-06-20 . chapter 1nice..soft and flowy..do keep writing =D |
 Bloodflower 2005-01-12 . chapter 1WOW.
Much thumbs up. Me loves. |
 i hOld tHe kEys oF lifE 2005-01-02 . chapter 1This is really really good ! |
 MELLABEE 2004-12-02 . chapter 1hey! This is really good - a poet in the making! I'm goin to read your other stories, I hope they are as good as this one!love Melz x |
 Temperamental 2004-11-24 . chapter 1This is a very pretty poem. I love the way you compare life and feelings to nature. The things you compare it to are awesome, too. Thank's for reviewing my work! I realized that it probably would sound similar to the passion of the Christ, but I never seen the movie, so I wouldn't know. Is there a part that seems really similar to the movie? Because if it does I should probably change it.Thank you, though! And keep writing! |
 Fofo 2004-11-24 . chapter 1That's a really beautiful poem. Well done. Kinda spooky though. The words seem to flow wonderfully. x x x Woona x x x |
 MysteriKat 2004-11-22 . chapter 1in a word: enchanting. i really enjoyed that. it touched on a few of the issues close to my own heart, like the environment and the effect our consumer driven society has on Her. i write alot of poems about the spiritual connection to nature, so this really appealed to me. well done. |
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