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| fictionmaniac 2006-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. Brilliant ending. And thanks for reviewing mine. Happy Writting! |
| dancingintheshadows 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThis story was brilliant! I was really surprised by the ending as well. I can't wait till you post some other stories if they are as good as this one. |
| MoonLitDemon 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseIt's sad how they all seem to learn the hard way NOT to trust someone. Rather bitter ending, but, hey, that's reality. A few typos and a few points where it seems like you've forgotten a word or two, but other than that, an excellent one shot story. I have to admit, it surprised me. Happy Hunting,MOONLITDEMON |
| depressed-and-bored 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseso sad...Is that the reason why tey targgeeted Amber? Good story. : ) |
| Zizziana Nightstar 2004-12-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat a twist at the end! That was wonderfully classic! I only wish we could have seen more of Devon's thoughts when he was on the phone but very nicely done. |
| Juni 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat start, very vivid. Thanks so much for the review, sorry it took me so long to check my email. I'll try to find time to read your other work, but it may take a while. Thanks! ~ Juni |
| jelie36 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuse*Claps* Wow, this was amazing, I really liked it. Great one shot, good story. You have some good writing skills, keep up the good work. -jelie36- |
| The-Mad-Reviewer 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseWow what a twist! I love it! Hopefully there will be more? I'm always eager to read interesting stories! Uhm I found no real problems, but it usually takes two or three chapters for a problem to come out and smack me. So it's great! Keep writing... Please. |