aw... (wink wink) but it's not like i know what happened (smiles anglically) But yes, i know how it feels... keep writing!!

i like the way this is written, its quite strange. i really like it, i like how you keep the same pattern, i like the strangeness, i like the emotions this carries within it. "first is gone, craving for another" that is my favourite line, well done, this is good, well structured, keep writing!